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Fall of the Rise


Wreck … wreck … recollect
Elect … elect a wreck
Wreck … recognize
I rolled the dice
Realize your device
A baseball bat made of eyes
Eyes … ice in my eyes
Remember I rolled the dice
Nobel device made of ice
Ice… ice hockey
Hockey?
Yes, hockey pokey
Ice cream
Brain freeze
BRAIN FREEZE! they scream...
Realize I rolled the dice
What a wreck
Wreck… recollect
Elect … elect a wreck
Recognize?
With this device tomorrow dies
I need some ice
Some good advice
I was the one that rolled the dice
Now realize
With your device tomorrow dies
Wreck … what a wreck
Wreck … recollect
Elect … elect a wreck
Wreck …RECOGNIZE!
Fall of the rise.
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poeticy
written by mrdarkhotsauce , July 15, 2008
a very poeticy poem!!
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written by mrdarkhotsauce , July 15, 2008
a very poeticy poem!!
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written by mrdarkhotsauce , July 15, 2008
a very poeticy poem!!
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I must be thick
written by chip , July 15, 2008
I like how it sounds, but i don't get it. :?
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I must be thick
written by chip , July 15, 2008
I like how it sounds, but i don't get it. :?
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I must be thick
written by chip , July 15, 2008
I like how it sounds, but i don't get it. :?
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written by fresh , July 15, 2008
ur a legend, pebble :grin
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written by fresh , July 15, 2008
ur a legend, pebble :grin
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written by fresh , July 15, 2008
ur a legend, pebble :grin
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written by Aku , July 15, 2008
good poem but as all good poems a follow up explanation as a comment please, much needed even though we gather some info from the pic. U write well, keep it up smilies/cool.gif
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written by Aku , July 15, 2008
good poem but as all good poems a follow up explanation as a comment please, much needed even though we gather some info from the pic. U write well, keep it up smilies/cool.gif
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written by Aku , July 15, 2008
good poem but as all good poems a follow up explanation as a comment please, much needed even though we gather some info from the pic. U write well, keep it up smilies/cool.gif
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written by k-talent-hustle-n-flow , July 15, 2008
poetry don't need no explanation. poetry is poetry. it don't have to make sense. especially good ones that's open to various interpretations.

Good one pebble. My instant expression when i finished reading it was 'LOL'.
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written by k-talent-hustle-n-flow , July 15, 2008
poetry don't need no explanation. poetry is poetry. it don't have to make sense. especially good ones that's open to various interpretations.

Good one pebble. My instant expression when i finished reading it was 'LOL'.
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written by k-talent-hustle-n-flow , July 15, 2008
poetry don't need no explanation. poetry is poetry. it don't have to make sense. especially good ones that's open to various interpretations.

Good one pebble. My instant expression when i finished reading it was 'LOL'.
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written by Zion , July 17, 2008
I read it over and over and each time I get some new meaning out of it. I see a bit of humor in it too. There seems to be a touch of anger? all in all a great work! very nice website too!
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written by Zion , July 17, 2008
I read it over and over and each time I get some new meaning out of it. I see a bit of humor in it too. There seems to be a touch of anger? all in all a great work! very nice website too!
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written by Zion , July 17, 2008
I read it over and over and each time I get some new meaning out of it. I see a bit of humor in it too. There seems to be a touch of anger? all in all a great work! very nice website too!
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written by Rummage , July 17, 2008
Thats real nice

One of my favourites
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written by Rummage , July 17, 2008
Thats real nice

One of my favourites
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written by Rummage , July 17, 2008
Thats real nice

One of my favourites
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