"I have about a dozen candidates to eliminate and another half a dozen or so to subscript before I can look up, so whoever you are, you are fashionably early. The rest of the guys should be arriving soon." He spoke like a surgeon in the middle of an operation; slowly and trying not to disturb the other half of his brain. The one that is figuring out the numbers scattered all over the page. The part of the brain that's in charge of the most important thing at this moment: the numbers. "Ah, okay... I'll be back" I said sensing he's not interested in a chit chat with anyone.
"Oh, you are a girl. I'm now officially distracted but my eyes refuse to look up. Would you mind staying so I can introduce myself once I'm done with this cell? I'm sure we haven't met before." He still wasn't looking up and spoke in the same tone. I wasn't sure if I liked being a distraction, but I didn't mind waiting for him. I had nowhere else to be. I came back to this garage for more of what I found last week. I had been counting down the days. I had been counting down the hours. I'm looking forward to getting back into this garage and being surrounded by these people whom I was accidentally acquainted with. Of course I'll wait for the Sudoku Surgeon. I had nowhere else to be. There was nowhere else I would rather be. So I waited. I didn't tell him I will. He didn't ask again. He just knew I was waiting. I didn't know exactly how long it would take for the numbers to fly out of his head, but I waited. I waited, and I am waiting.
This is now my second Monday at Mayel's garage. It is addictive. The people are painfully blunt. I wasn't too comfortable when Mayel invited me in for the first time. I was the only female and felt like an intruder in some gender specific sect. But I washed my fear with a bottle of Stella passed to me by a guy with a braided goatee.
"Here you go my lady, don't say no and break my heart." He whispered his name and winked as I extended my hand with a smile to acknowledge his kindness and accept the offer. "Isac"
Isac handed me the bottle and returned to the heated argument. "But you have to understand that Intelligence Quotient was conducted by some German psychologist and it..." The other guy jumped in raising his voice. "It doesn't matter who invented the IQ test! Intelligence and knowledge are two entirely different things!"
They were already half way through this argument when I walked in. I just sat there and listened. Isac reached for his paint stained bag and pulled out a book, Sigmund Freud: Civilization and its Discontents. He began to flick through the pages while waiting for his turn to make a point. I had my eyes fixed on the title of the book. Their voices became a blurred background. I began to wallow through my own discontents. I tried to list them, but it was hard listening to my own head while all these male voices were echoing off the garage walls.
I found myself fixated on Isac’s braided goatee. It moved amiably while he was chanting out words aimlessly in an attempt to force sense out of his thoughts. May be I was the only one his thoughts couldn’t make sense to. His braided goatee made more sense than his words. It spoke loudly of his character. He is his own person. His hair was half mess, a quarter dread locks and a quarter old braids. It looked like the physical form of his thoughts. It is easy to see a lot of thinking goes on in his head. He’s just not as gifted with wording his thoughts as the other guys, so they keep interrupting him and make their points. He starts to play with his goatee as frustration comes knocking on his door. Perhaps an endeavour to calm himself down. I wanted to touch his goatee too, but I had only just met the guy.
He is right under my nose. I’m staring at his fingers play with the pencil he uses to stab the page, and I am waiting. I’m still waiting to meet the Sudoku Surgeon.
...to be continued
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written by tawawa , July 01, 2008
written by tawawa , July 01, 2008
i want to meet sudoku surgeon too :grin. So pebble,wat is it, i must ask this, that really get hooked on this character? i mean, if someone pays more attention on thr sudoku, rather thn gt to know me, i wld read tht differently. but i must say, tht is 1 hell of a character u got there
i think im inlove...with THE SUDOKU SURGEON
nd i love ur observing nature
people who observe others are amazing creatures!
ur an amazing creature :grin
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i think im inlove...with THE SUDOKU SURGEON
nd i love ur observing nature
people who observe others are amazing creatures! ur an amazing creature :grin
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written by tawawa , July 01, 2008
written by tawawa , July 01, 2008
i want to meet sudoku surgeon too :grin. So pebble,wat is it, i must ask this, that really get hooked on this character? i mean, if someone pays more attention on thr sudoku, rather thn gt to know me, i wld read tht differently. but i must say, tht is 1 hell of a character u got there
i think im inlove...with THE SUDOKU SURGEON
nd i love ur observing nature
people who observe others are amazing creatures!
ur an amazing creature :grin
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i think im inlove...with THE SUDOKU SURGEON
nd i love ur observing nature
people who observe others are amazing creatures! ur an amazing creature :grin
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written by pebble+ , July 01, 2008
written by pebble+ , July 01, 2008
I don't know much about him. But I have a feeling he knows what's in my head. I'm drawn because I know nothing about him. I know nothing about him, but I already like his aura.
and so, I'll wait for him till he is ready to meet me. how long would my patience last, i don't really know.
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and so, I'll wait for him till he is ready to meet me. how long would my patience last, i don't really know.
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written by pebble+ , July 01, 2008
written by pebble+ , July 01, 2008
I don't know much about him. But I have a feeling he knows what's in my head. I'm drawn because I know nothing about him. I know nothing about him, but I already like his aura.
and so, I'll wait for him till he is ready to meet me. how long would my patience last, i don't really know.
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and so, I'll wait for him till he is ready to meet me. how long would my patience last, i don't really know.
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written by pebble+ , July 01, 2008
written by pebble+ , July 01, 2008
I don't know much about him. But I have a feeling he knows what's in my head. I'm drawn because I know nothing about him. I know nothing about him, but I already like his aura.
and so, I'll wait for him till he is ready to meet me. how long would my patience last, i don't really know.
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and so, I'll wait for him till he is ready to meet me. how long would my patience last, i don't really know.
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written by I-lost-my-camel , July 01, 2008
written by I-lost-my-camel , July 01, 2008
why just wait?
why not prepare
maybe he does not want you to give him space
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why not prepare
maybe he does not want you to give him space
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written by I-lost-my-camel , July 01, 2008
written by I-lost-my-camel , July 01, 2008
why just wait?
why not prepare
maybe he does not want you to give him space
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why not prepare
maybe he does not want you to give him space
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written by I-lost-my-camel , July 01, 2008
written by I-lost-my-camel , July 01, 2008
why just wait?
why not prepare
maybe he does not want you to give him space
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why not prepare
maybe he does not want you to give him space
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written by pebble+ , July 01, 2008
written by pebble+ , July 01, 2008
why wait? because that's what the surgeon asked me to do. and I enjoy observing him dissect his sudoku.
why not prepare? prepare for what exactly?
nobody said anything about space. I have no problem with his space or mine. we both sit comfortably. Me, waiting... and he.. figuring out his numbers. So I wait for his head to be free of numbers.
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why not prepare? prepare for what exactly?
nobody said anything about space. I have no problem with his space or mine. we both sit comfortably. Me, waiting... and he.. figuring out his numbers. So I wait for his head to be free of numbers.
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written by pebble+ , July 01, 2008
written by pebble+ , July 01, 2008
why wait? because that's what the surgeon asked me to do. and I enjoy observing him dissect his sudoku.
why not prepare? prepare for what exactly?
nobody said anything about space. I have no problem with his space or mine. we both sit comfortably. Me, waiting... and he.. figuring out his numbers. So I wait for his head to be free of numbers.
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why not prepare? prepare for what exactly?
nobody said anything about space. I have no problem with his space or mine. we both sit comfortably. Me, waiting... and he.. figuring out his numbers. So I wait for his head to be free of numbers.
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written by pebble+ , July 01, 2008
written by pebble+ , July 01, 2008
why wait? because that's what the surgeon asked me to do. and I enjoy observing him dissect his sudoku.
why not prepare? prepare for what exactly?
nobody said anything about space. I have no problem with his space or mine. we both sit comfortably. Me, waiting... and he.. figuring out his numbers. So I wait for his head to be free of numbers.
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why not prepare? prepare for what exactly?
nobody said anything about space. I have no problem with his space or mine. we both sit comfortably. Me, waiting... and he.. figuring out his numbers. So I wait for his head to be free of numbers.
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written by tawawa , July 01, 2008
written by tawawa , July 01, 2008
lol@pebble!
waiting has a beauty! its beautiful to just wait! well, given tht the individual is patient...at the end though it gives birth to somethng beautiful
wait! abstinence is the way to go! true love waits.. ahahahahahahahahahahahahashhaahahhahahahahahahahahahhah
ahahahahahahahahahahhaha..omg, im so funny
! lol
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waiting has a beauty! its beautiful to just wait! well, given tht the individual is patient...at the end though it gives birth to somethng beautiful
wait! abstinence is the way to go! true love waits.. ahahahahahahahahahahahahashhaahahhahahahahahahahahahhah
ahahahahahahahahahahhaha..omg, im so funny
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written by tawawa , July 01, 2008
written by tawawa , July 01, 2008
lol@pebble!
waiting has a beauty! its beautiful to just wait! well, given tht the individual is patient...at the end though it gives birth to somethng beautiful
wait! abstinence is the way to go! true love waits.. ahahahahahahahahahahahahashhaahahhahahahahahahahahahhah
ahahahahahahahahahahhaha..omg, im so funny
! lol
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waiting has a beauty! its beautiful to just wait! well, given tht the individual is patient...at the end though it gives birth to somethng beautiful
wait! abstinence is the way to go! true love waits.. ahahahahahahahahahahahahashhaahahhahahahahahahahahahhah
ahahahahahahahahahahhaha..omg, im so funny
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written by tawawa , July 01, 2008
written by tawawa , July 01, 2008
lol@pebble!
waiting has a beauty! its beautiful to just wait! well, given tht the individual is patient...at the end though it gives birth to somethng beautiful
wait! abstinence is the way to go! true love waits.. ahahahahahahahahahahahahashhaahahhahahahahahahahahahhah
ahahahahahahahahahahhaha..omg, im so funny
! lol
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waiting has a beauty! its beautiful to just wait! well, given tht the individual is patient...at the end though it gives birth to somethng beautiful
wait! abstinence is the way to go! true love waits.. ahahahahahahahahahahahahashhaahahhahahahahahahahahahhah
ahahahahahahahahahahhaha..omg, im so funny
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written by I-lost-my-camel , July 01, 2008
written by I-lost-my-camel , July 01, 2008
been disobediant sometimes pays off, by waiting for him you are actually letting him control you. How can you let that little man(people who play sodoku are short usually) bend you to his will.
why prepare? because if you are going to wait for him you should at least have something to say that will shak any numbers left in his from the game.
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why prepare? because if you are going to wait for him you should at least have something to say that will shak any numbers left in his from the game.
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written by I-lost-my-camel , July 01, 2008
written by I-lost-my-camel , July 01, 2008
been disobediant sometimes pays off, by waiting for him you are actually letting him control you. How can you let that little man(people who play sodoku are short usually) bend you to his will.
why prepare? because if you are going to wait for him you should at least have something to say that will shak any numbers left in his from the game.
Email me beautiful thing :p
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why prepare? because if you are going to wait for him you should at least have something to say that will shak any numbers left in his from the game.
Email me beautiful thing :p
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written by I-lost-my-camel , July 01, 2008
written by I-lost-my-camel , July 01, 2008
been disobediant sometimes pays off, by waiting for him you are actually letting him control you. How can you let that little man(people who play sodoku are short usually) bend you to his will.
why prepare? because if you are going to wait for him you should at least have something to say that will shak any numbers left in his from the game.
Email me beautiful thing :p
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why prepare? because if you are going to wait for him you should at least have something to say that will shak any numbers left in his from the game.
Email me beautiful thing :p
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written by tawawa , July 01, 2008
written by tawawa , July 01, 2008
well, why should she give him the idea tht she really, really, really wants to get to know him?
whats so good abt the little man tht plays sudoku, and sits on the recycling bin :zzz
and no, dnt prepare. if he wants u he wants u! ur beautiful the way u r..dnt play no games! be REAL! FREAKIN MEN!!!
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whats so good abt the little man tht plays sudoku, and sits on the recycling bin :zzz and no, dnt prepare. if he wants u he wants u! ur beautiful the way u r..dnt play no games! be REAL! FREAKIN MEN!!!
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written by tawawa , July 01, 2008
written by tawawa , July 01, 2008
well, why should she give him the idea tht she really, really, really wants to get to know him?
whats so good abt the little man tht plays sudoku, and sits on the recycling bin :zzz
and no, dnt prepare. if he wants u he wants u! ur beautiful the way u r..dnt play no games! be REAL! FREAKIN MEN!!!
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whats so good abt the little man tht plays sudoku, and sits on the recycling bin :zzz and no, dnt prepare. if he wants u he wants u! ur beautiful the way u r..dnt play no games! be REAL! FREAKIN MEN!!!
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written by tawawa , July 01, 2008
written by tawawa , July 01, 2008
well, why should she give him the idea tht she really, really, really wants to get to know him?
whats so good abt the little man tht plays sudoku, and sits on the recycling bin :zzz
and no, dnt prepare. if he wants u he wants u! ur beautiful the way u r..dnt play no games! be REAL! FREAKIN MEN!!!
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whats so good abt the little man tht plays sudoku, and sits on the recycling bin :zzz and no, dnt prepare. if he wants u he wants u! ur beautiful the way u r..dnt play no games! be REAL! FREAKIN MEN!!!
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written by I_lost-my-camel , July 02, 2008
written by I_lost-my-camel , July 02, 2008
hey wazwaz
I got you're email
:roll
can you also include a picture next time :grin
back to the topic at hand
beauty has nothing to do with it anymore
its all about body odur now
make sure you smell good
P.S wazwaz yes i do plan to smell you when i see you
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I got you're email
:roll can you also include a picture next time :grin
back to the topic at hand
beauty has nothing to do with it anymore
its all about body odur now
make sure you smell good
P.S wazwaz yes i do plan to smell you when i see you
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written by I_lost-my-camel , July 02, 2008
written by I_lost-my-camel , July 02, 2008
hey wazwaz
I got you're email
:roll
can you also include a picture next time :grin
back to the topic at hand
beauty has nothing to do with it anymore
its all about body odur now
make sure you smell good
P.S wazwaz yes i do plan to smell you when i see you
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I got you're email
:roll can you also include a picture next time :grin
back to the topic at hand
beauty has nothing to do with it anymore
its all about body odur now
make sure you smell good
P.S wazwaz yes i do plan to smell you when i see you
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written by I_lost-my-camel , July 02, 2008
written by I_lost-my-camel , July 02, 2008
hey wazwaz
I got you're email
:roll
can you also include a picture next time :grin
back to the topic at hand
beauty has nothing to do with it anymore
its all about body odur now
make sure you smell good
P.S wazwaz yes i do plan to smell you when i see you
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I got you're email
:roll can you also include a picture next time :grin
back to the topic at hand
beauty has nothing to do with it anymore
its all about body odur now
make sure you smell good
P.S wazwaz yes i do plan to smell you when i see you
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written by tawawa , July 02, 2008
written by tawawa , July 02, 2008
for all i know u coul be some perv! u know what they say abt men who seem to HAVE IT ALL bt r still single- thrs somethng wrong! :p
i like people who smell me :roll lol..ahaahhahahhaa!!!
ill have on my unforgivable woman...nd by the end of the night, ul definitely be able to put two and two together :roll :ee
i like a man who wears hs calvin klein...sexy...u gt wr ths is gng????
truly urs, UNFORGIVABLE WOMAN
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i like people who smell me :roll lol..ahaahhahahhaa!!!
ill have on my unforgivable woman...nd by the end of the night, ul definitely be able to put two and two together :roll :ee
i like a man who wears hs calvin klein...sexy...u gt wr ths is gng????
truly urs, UNFORGIVABLE WOMAN
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written by tawawa , July 02, 2008
written by tawawa , July 02, 2008
for all i know u coul be some perv! u know what they say abt men who seem to HAVE IT ALL bt r still single- thrs somethng wrong! :p
i like people who smell me :roll lol..ahaahhahahhaa!!!
ill have on my unforgivable woman...nd by the end of the night, ul definitely be able to put two and two together :roll :ee
i like a man who wears hs calvin klein...sexy...u gt wr ths is gng????
truly urs, UNFORGIVABLE WOMAN
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i like people who smell me :roll lol..ahaahhahahhaa!!!
ill have on my unforgivable woman...nd by the end of the night, ul definitely be able to put two and two together :roll :ee
i like a man who wears hs calvin klein...sexy...u gt wr ths is gng????
truly urs, UNFORGIVABLE WOMAN
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written by tawawa , July 02, 2008
written by tawawa , July 02, 2008
for all i know u coul be some perv! u know what they say abt men who seem to HAVE IT ALL bt r still single- thrs somethng wrong! :p
i like people who smell me :roll lol..ahaahhahahhaa!!!
ill have on my unforgivable woman...nd by the end of the night, ul definitely be able to put two and two together :roll :ee
i like a man who wears hs calvin klein...sexy...u gt wr ths is gng????
truly urs, UNFORGIVABLE WOMAN
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i like people who smell me :roll lol..ahaahhahahhaa!!!
ill have on my unforgivable woman...nd by the end of the night, ul definitely be able to put two and two together :roll :ee
i like a man who wears hs calvin klein...sexy...u gt wr ths is gng????
truly urs, UNFORGIVABLE WOMAN
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written by passer by , July 04, 2008
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"I began to wallow through my own discontents. I tried to list them, but it was hard listening to my own head while all these male voices were echoing off the garage walls."
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written by passer by , July 04, 2008
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"I began to wallow through my own discontents. I tried to list them, but it was hard listening to my own head while all these male voices were echoing off the garage walls."
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written by passer by , July 04, 2008
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"I began to wallow through my own discontents. I tried to list them, but it was hard listening to my own head while all these male voices were echoing off the garage walls."
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written by passer by , July 04, 2008
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Isac's goatee is very vivid. I wonder what the sudoku surgeon looks like. will we meet him?
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Isac's goatee is very vivid. I wonder what the sudoku surgeon looks like. will we meet him?
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Isac's goatee is very vivid. I wonder what the sudoku surgeon looks like. will we meet him?
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written by Aku , July 13, 2008
written by Aku , July 13, 2008
beautiful writing I await the next episode, and that book seems interesting, maybe ul tell us what its about it?.... I wait, I, waiting for the next episode
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written by Aku , July 13, 2008
written by Aku , July 13, 2008
beautiful writing I await the next episode, and that book seems interesting, maybe ul tell us what its about it?.... I wait, I, waiting for the next episode
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written by Aku , July 13, 2008
written by Aku , July 13, 2008
beautiful writing I await the next episode, and that book seems interesting, maybe ul tell us what its about it?.... I wait, I, waiting for the next episode
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written by chip , July 13, 2008
written by chip , July 13, 2008
I love the way you write pebble! not much of a reader, but I'm becoming a fan! keep writing like this and you'll have us all coming back for more!
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written by chip , July 13, 2008
written by chip , July 13, 2008
I love the way you write pebble! not much of a reader, but I'm becoming a fan! keep writing like this and you'll have us all coming back for more!
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written by chip , July 13, 2008
written by chip , July 13, 2008
I love the way you write pebble! not much of a reader, but I'm becoming a fan! keep writing like this and you'll have us all coming back for more!
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written by Zion , July 17, 2008
written by Zion , July 17, 2008
I too am waiting for the next chapter! when is it due?
captivating style!
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captivating style!
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nd i love ur observing nature
ur an amazing creature :grin